| Rating |
Criteria |
A |
_ engaging, creative, and thoughtful
_ precise,
vivid, and sophisticated vocabulary; varied patterns and lengths of sentences
_ coherent
and organized structure
_ chosen
form effectively and innovatively conveys content
_ relevant
and intriguing use of details to convey personality and experience of person interviewed
_ few
surface feature errors; only noticeable if looking for them |
B |
_ clear and thoughtful
_ complex,
precise vocabulary and varied sentences
_ logical
organization
_ chosen
form effectively conveys content
_ relevant
and careful use of details to convey personality and experience of person interviewed
_ few
surface feature errors; occasional spelling or punctuation errors |
C |
_ quite well developed and detailed
_ generally
precise vocabulary and complex sentence structures containing minimal errors
_ obvious
organization
_ chosen
form appropriate for content
_ relevant
use of details to convey personality and experience of person interviewed
_ generally
few surface feature errors; some punctuation, spelling, or pronoun reference errors |
D |
_ direct and usually clear
_ straightforward
vocabulary and effective sentences that are rarely complex or varied
_ organization
evident
_ chosen
form generally appropriate for content
_ competent
use of details to convey personality and experience of person interviewed
_ surface
feature errors such as comma splice, spelling, or pronoun reference errors |
REWRITE |
_ limited clarity and thought
_ unsophisticated
and, at times, inappropriate vocabulary with simple sentences
_ evidence
of some organization
_ chosen
form rarely conveys content effectively
_ inconsistent
use of details to convey personality and experience of person interviewed
_ surface
feature errors may at times distract reader
_ message
is clear, understandable, and thought-provoking |